Storyline

Oh my I'm only on the second chapter lol knew Gavin couldn't have beaten someone lol. And connie the sneaky deity she snuck the release by us all. I was expecting an early release but a whole 14 days early !!!! If I'd known I'd have checked every 10 mins before going to work and only got it today when I finished work oh well I'll soon catch up with the rest of you and start speculating on the various subplots and ramifications for the characters soon enough

I am also wondering what happened to Garwin Wyatt. It is actually 18 years since the time of Demon's Dream. Bel is 16 years old. Garwin was to be born two years before that. Also Kiarra made the comment about the rogues taking 18 years to build up. So that should make Wyatt 18 years.

I searched and there is no Garwin or Wyatt mentioned.

Teeg mentions he doesn't like how Edward and Auri are watching him when he goes to Avendor. That is when Reah commented via mind voice "you think they don't have cause?" So I agree, I wonder what else he did in the 18 years and what happened with Wyatt. We hear about Lissa's twin Falchani kids and Bel that wants to tag along to Falchani. That makes me worried for Wyatt.

Also, we can tell Gavin, Teeg, and likely Norian have mind clouds. As per what Ashe said, this aggravates tendencies to violence and other bad behavior. So Gavin and Teeg are even more angry and trending to violence than usual. Norian is over the board on trying to get to Kay. All are being major dirt bags with mind cloud pushing the way. I wonder how long the clouds have been in place?

I see that Cheedas also got a mind cloud for awhile and then also obsess spelled. Poor Cheedas at the end. Its going to take awhile for him to reconcile what he did.

I also wonder about the "power that be" godling Janis who brought Breanne forward. One, it sound like he threaten her. Also sounds like he gave some other threats beyond harm to her. He also seemed to push Gavin's angry button by saying he could have her for a mate also. This guys sounds like he is working for the rogue gods. So he question is, will Belen and Lissa find out?

Yea for Breanne for getting some taxes fixed so Lissa won't keep spending herself into poor house.
Also, it was painful to see how she worked hard for the comusela but they treated her like trash.

Gavin and Teeg will need to answer for putting compulsion on Breanne's possible mates.
I agree, I think her possible mates are shown by the sign of inability to read. IF they will become a mate is another matter. So I have so far: Stellan, Trevor, Kooper, Fes, and Trajan, and possibly Ashe?

Im thinking Kal is a probable mate also after some seeeeeerious grovelling and a personality transplant!

Actually, I think your right on Kal. At least they are prophesied to work together with a changer. However, prophesies don't always work out. Reah was prophesied to be Kirifin's "daughter of his heart". We know how well THAT went. I wonder if Kal has a mind cloud, or, if he is just the sullen personality he seems. I know he is doing everything he can to make is father mad, but still!

Anyone catch that Breanne had not had sex before? Also due to her previous life's beatings or other she had been deformed?

About not having sex before and deformed, I did catch that. I think there was something vague about what happened to her at age 21? Also the person that took her off Earth threatened her about someone or something still on Earth?

I need to read it again to remember all the details

I dont think that Kal has a mind cloud, I'm sure Pheligar mentions to Breanne that he had a troubled up-bringing which seems to be due to whatever Ferrigar's decree was. So his general doucheness is because of that, still no excuse mind! Im hopeing that he ends up with Breanne after she makes him suffer a bit lol.

And as for the no sex/defformed stuff it does seem that she was somehow kept prisoner and tortured or something

Im still not happy with Cheedas though, the obsession couldnt be helped however all the bullying beforehand was just cruel, and unless i missed it there didnt seem to be a mind cloud on him?